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Yes. And thanks both of you. This is helpful feedback as I try to refine the communication skills.
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Walter Shaub
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Fatal admission! He was looking for a job "while we process the request for a certificate of divestiture." The job has to necessitate the CD pic.twitter.com/GcsFGP57mg
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Walter Shaub
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As I learn to translate Legalese into the language of actual human people from earth, could u give feedback on whether this is any clearer? pic.twitter.com/JP4ZvjoxrQ
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Ophelia Bedford
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More clear for sure! Only tweaks would be use more nouns instead of they and he, because there are a few theys to keep straight.
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neets
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Was about to suggest the same, also the "it" in your second paragraph (Skybridge?). Thanks for the explanation; I get lost in legalese.
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Ophelia Bedford
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Very welcome. And I greatly appreciate your efforts to make these matters tractable to us in the public.
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